Editing Catapult

a resource for authors

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Watch for hidden verbs

Hidden verbs are phrases that contain a weak verb plus a noun instead of a stronger verb.

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How to punctuate dialogue

Explanation of how to punctuate dialogue in various instances with examples from published books.

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Do the action, don’t intend to do it

Intention instead of action creates a distance between the reader and the character. And the reader may wonder if the character actually completed the action.

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The present in the past

When writing in past tense, writers should pay attention to adverbs that deal with time.

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Using style sheets

A style sheet records information and editorial decisions about a manuscript, from spelling to punctuation and other grammar issues to character descriptions and the timeline.

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Body parts not included

If the action being done by a body part is an action that can only be accomplished by a specific body part, you don’t need to include the body part in the description.

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Not an essay

Readers don’t need to be led through the story with the explicit use of words such as first, next, finally, then, before, and after.

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Unfilter your words

Don’t filter descriptions through words that create space between the reader and the characters’ experiences.

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Avoid filler words

Filler words need to be identified and removed/replaced with stronger words.

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The quest for the right editor

Finding the right editor can be quite the journey, but once you’ve reached that destination, the quest will be worth it.

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